Sunday, August 3, 2014

Rolling in an Endless Sea

credit Truedessa
reflections in the  morning light 
gentle waves, whispering  hello   
tranquility, sea of delight
reflections in the  morning light 
love a treasure, dreams in the night
tides of emotion, ebb and flow 
reflections in the morning light 
gentle waves, whispering  hello 

posted for Poets United

37 comments:

  1. Sweet! Love the picture...saying in a wave "hello"
    ZQ

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    1. Waving at you thanks for visiting..

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  2. This is very soothing, an invitation to go with the flow. Nice.

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    1. I think sometimes we need to go with the flow.

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  3. beautiful.. soothing. . wouldn't mind staying there for awhile.

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    1. It was a very peaceful morning walking on the beach..thanks for reading.

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  4. nice use of repetition...like those waves coming in...
    i would love to be back by the ocean again...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      I tried to compose a poem in the form of a triolet. Bjorn and Mary do these quite well. The ocean is one of those places that really help soothe life at times.

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  5. Truedessa, I feel the rhythm of the waves as I read your poem! Lovely.

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    1. Thanks Mary..always appreciate your visits.

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  6. Fantastic verse and amazing picture.

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    1. Hi Gail,

      Thanks for visiting..I enjoyed your poem as well.

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  7. So beautiful it made me homesick!

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    1. Ah Sherry my friend I knew you would feel the ocean..I hope you make it there real soon.

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  8. I like how the serene ebb and flow of the waves seem to be reflected in your words.

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    1. Thank you Gabriella..the gentle flow in a morning sun..

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  9. Thank you for bringing me the sea image....ah! xx

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  10. I could feel the ebb and flow in your beautiful poem - K

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    1. Thank you for your kind words.

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  11. The waves roll, with a hello. Like life in and out, not always gentle, but can soothe away on such a day.

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    1. The seas can be calm or rough indeed like life sometimes..I prefer the gentle rolls though.

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    1. Thanks Gloria..I have to come visit and see what you've been baking.

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    2. You always are welcome dear!

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  13. love the tranquility...beautiful...

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  14. ah the magic of the sea... her whisper and greeting...the soothing rhythm of her waves..sigh... missing her

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    1. There is just something mystical about the sea and magical..

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  15. Beautifully written. You've captured the tranquility of the sea perfectly.

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    1. Thank you Stephanie for visiting and leaving a comment.

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  16. I love the ocean.
    Everything in motion

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    1. I too love the ocean
      so full of emotion

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  17. a rolling, endless treasure... i love this poem following the haunting beauty of black roses left behind.

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    1. Thank you Ed, the rolling waters bring hope..

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