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| credit Truedessa |
reflections in the morning light
gentle waves, whispering hello
gentle waves, whispering hello
tranquility, sea of delight
reflections in the morning light
love a treasure, dreams in the night
tides of emotion, ebb and flow
reflections in the morning light
gentle waves, whispering hello
reflections in the morning light
love a treasure, dreams in the night
tides of emotion, ebb and flow
reflections in the morning light
gentle waves, whispering hello
posted for Poets United
Sweet! Love the picture...saying in a wave "hello"
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Waving at you thanks for visiting..
DeleteThis is very soothing, an invitation to go with the flow. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI think sometimes we need to go with the flow.
Deletebeautiful.. soothing. . wouldn't mind staying there for awhile.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very peaceful morning walking on the beach..thanks for reading.
Deletenice use of repetition...like those waves coming in...
ReplyDeletei would love to be back by the ocean again...
Hi Brian,
DeleteI tried to compose a poem in the form of a triolet. Bjorn and Mary do these quite well. The ocean is one of those places that really help soothe life at times.
That flowed really well!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex..
DeleteTruedessa, I feel the rhythm of the waves as I read your poem! Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary..always appreciate your visits.
DeleteFantastic verse and amazing picture.
ReplyDeleteHi Gail,
DeleteThanks for visiting..I enjoyed your poem as well.
So beautiful it made me homesick!
ReplyDeleteAh Sherry my friend I knew you would feel the ocean..I hope you make it there real soon.
DeleteI like how the serene ebb and flow of the waves seem to be reflected in your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gabriella..the gentle flow in a morning sun..
DeleteThank you for bringing me the sea image....ah! xx
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome..
DeleteI could feel the ebb and flow in your beautiful poem - K
ReplyDeleteThe waves roll, with a hello. Like life in and out, not always gentle, but can soothe away on such a day.
ReplyDeleteThe seas can be calm or rough indeed like life sometimes..I prefer the gentle rolls though.
DeleteBeautiful Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gloria..I have to come visit and see what you've been baking.
DeleteYou always are welcome dear!
Deletelove the tranquility...beautiful...
ReplyDeleteah the magic of the sea... her whisper and greeting...the soothing rhythm of her waves..sigh... missing her
ReplyDeleteThere is just something mystical about the sea and magical..
DeleteBeautifully written. You've captured the tranquility of the sea perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThank you Stephanie for visiting and leaving a comment.
DeleteI love the ocean.
ReplyDeleteEverything in motion
I too love the ocean
Deleteso full of emotion
a rolling, endless treasure... i love this poem following the haunting beauty of black roses left behind.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ed, the rolling waters bring hope..
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