Sunday, August 24, 2014

Beyond the Landscape

Starry Night by Alex Ruiz















Under a starry sky he takes in the view
capturing moments indescribable night
palette of colors ready  in various hues
releasing tension, into  the dancing light

her sweet scent lingers in the meadow
a wildflower,  that sings her own song
painting her beauty, a soulful falsetto
together they create magic and belong

twinkling bright , distant  heaven above
diamond teardrops, falling from the sky
inspiring his muse,  soft  brushes of love
she is out there waiting,  his heart sighs

beyond the landscape,  sweet dreams
stroked on a canvas, words unspoken
here he creates art under moonbeams
may this magical spell never be broken

posted for the prompt Magpie Tales #234
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28 comments:

  1. Pat HattAugust 24, 2014

    A spell to last for all time, as only two can paint such an image, trick is for the two to be found and in each other for them to surround.

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughAugust 24, 2014

    That had such a wonderful flow, Truedsessa.

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  3. GraceAugust 24, 2014

    This has a dream like rhythm much like that ending line:

    may this magical spell never be broken

    Good one Truedessa ~ Have a good week ~

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  4. Brian MillerAugust 24, 2014

    ah you have created a beautiful link between the two...and i love that the meadow carries her scent...she is so there...and so i can see where his inspiration and the magic comes from...smiles.

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  5. Roland D. YeomansAugust 24, 2014

    Alex is right: this has such a wonderful texture and flowing imagery. :-)

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  6. AnonymousAugust 24, 2014

    Beautiful. Just beautiful!

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  7. steveroniAugust 24, 2014

    LOVE aroma of meadow, wildflower, and...she!
    Written SO well!

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  8. Sumana RoyAugust 25, 2014

    "beyond the landscape, sweet dreams"...the line works wonder and the magic spell is everlasting...an amazing write

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  9. Stafford RayAugust 25, 2014

    A sensitive take, soft and dreamy and magical, as is the picture.

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  10. Vandana SharmaAugust 25, 2014

    The beautiful dream world:)

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  11. Silent Otto August 25, 2014

    I love these alchemical lovers ...thanks True'

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  12. Optimistic ExistentialistAugust 25, 2014

    Using the beauty of the night sky as inspiration for his art...what an amazing poem :-)

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  13. MaryAugust 25, 2014

    What a lovely poem you have written, Truedessa! Oh that we all had such a magical experience.

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  14. GabriellaAugust 25, 2014

    Your words are a beautiful poetic illustration of the photo. I like the image of the 'diamond teardrops'.

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  15. kaykualaAugust 25, 2014

    may this magical spell never be broken

    If only such dreams can be sustained. It may when two persons share the same dreams. Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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  16. Blue GrumpsterAugust 25, 2014

    Soft brushes of love... I like that. And I like you.
    But that you already knew. ;)

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  17. brudbergAugust 25, 2014

    I could not think of a better way to describe true romance, that of the heart - in deepest harmony with the moonbeams and stars-

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  18. humbirdAugust 25, 2014

    I loved this 'magical spell' ! :)x

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  19. Carrie Van HornAugust 25, 2014

    A magical write Truedessa. :-)

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  20. 21 WitsAugust 25, 2014

    I feel that magical spell working its magic already!

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  21. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 25, 2014

    I LOVE "a wildflower that sings her own song"......

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  22. Susan AndersonAugust 26, 2014

    The photo IS magical, which makes your poem the best kind of response to it.

    =)

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  23. PokeyAugust 26, 2014

    Sweet:)) The words intertwine with the picture beautifully!

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  24. BerowneAugust 26, 2014

    Grand, splendid and quite well-done...

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  25. PeggyAugust 26, 2014

    I enjoyed this. thanks for posting.

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  26. WayneAugust 27, 2014

    So good....thanks for sharing your words

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  27. Gloria BakerAugust 27, 2014

    Magical and beautiful Truedessa:)

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  28. AnonymousAugust 28, 2014

    I agree, this is magical. Wonderful journey. Love and Light, S

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