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in a dreamy sky two lighthearted fools meet
shimmering moonbeams stirring their hearts
filled with lofty thoughts, spirits softly greet
whimsical adventures, creative works of art
drums of a different beat, inspiring dance
lyrical harp, resounding joy, shooting stars
musical notes fill the air, whispering romance
taking flight, spreading wings, flying to mars
caught in the grey mist of summer nights
lingering thoughts of you play in my head
arousing sensations, climbing new heights
drifting clouds, softness feather light bed
two light hearted fools, kindred souls
meshing together we become whole
posted for dVerse open link night...Thank you for visiting
Truedessa, I really like the playfulness of this poem. Not a bad thing to be a 'light-hearred fool,' I don't think. I love 'spreading wings, flying to Mars.'
ReplyDeleteGood Evening Mary,
DeleteThanks for the visit and your kind words the other day. I hit a rough spot. I always appreciate your thoughtfulness you have a good heart.
The heavens reflect our lives...
ReplyDeleteHello,
DeleteThat is so true.
ha. what better mis than two lighthearted fools joining together...and it too can become something so very special...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian,
DeleteWell, lighthearted fools makes for an interesting life.
two light hearted fools as one
ReplyDeleteDoesn't sound like a bad deed to be done
As long as no martians came into play
That may just ruin their day
Thoughts a plenty would surely linger around
two together could astound
Whole in a mesh
Flesh to flesh
No martians or they might have to run
Deleteor should I say fly to another planet
perhaps, Jupiter or Venus.
Maybe one unexplored
DeleteEither way they'd never be bored
That is true as they fly about
Deleteperhaps, they would find a new
planet of their own..so many
things to discover...
I specially like the second stanza: the drum beats, the musical notes, lovely romantic share ~
ReplyDeleteThank you for the visit and lovely comment.
DeleteThe rhythm of this adds to the lightheartedness. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you Victoria.
Deletesmiles...sometimes the right people just meet and inspire each other so much that they indeed fly and soar and become whole together...nice
ReplyDeleteGood Morning Claudia,
DeleteSometimes we are lucky to meet one that inspires our muse or becomes our muse. Have a lovely day!
Hey you... ;o)
ReplyDelete~shoes~
Hey Shoes :)
DeleteHope you have a great day..thanks for being here the journey continues on..smiling..
I will never see a those summer clouds with the same eyes again -- singing love like dancing clouds
ReplyDeleteBjorn,
DeleteI so enjoy watching clouds dance in the sky so light and wispy.
...it's heart warming to note how the clouds & sky are often a witness to the communion of two mates in love... sometimes, i dream to be a cloud so i can see how love can gather strangers to make a match after heaven.... loved this.... tender & beautiful... smiles...
ReplyDeleteGood Morning Kelvin,
DeleteHe who sports a mustache:)..I agree wouldn't it be great to be a cloud for a day traveling the heavens. When I fly I am always in awe of the clouds..it is different looking down at them but, they still hold that magic that makes one dream.
Have a great day my friend in your part of the world!
I love the second stanza, beautiful .
ReplyDeleteayala, thank you so much it is always nice to have you visit.
DeleteTruedessa, thank you for beginning my day with such a romantic journey through the clouds, such a wonderful poem of love.
ReplyDeleteThank you for coming to visit and I'm glad I helped you start your day.
DeleteI love the word whimsical. You captured that whimsical romance in your poem and presented it with gentleness to frame the words.
ReplyDeleteHi Beth,
DeleteI agree the word evokes a magical feeling. Thank you for visiting.