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Dreaming under a honey coated moon
my mind strays smoky thoughts of you
your silky voice melting me away
let me love you, come into my room
two shadows sway against the wall
caught in the rapid rush of night
growling saxophone playing our tune
warmth caressing hot bare flesh
hungry sighs the hum hum sound
unbroken shattering the silence
somewhere in between here and there
between love and paradise we dance
between love and paradise we dance
somewhere in between here and there
Dreaming under a honey coated moon
bodies surrender , slow and smooth
your gentle hands, trace my frame
I touch you here, you touch me there
bodies quivering to the jazzy beat
playing in the heated flush of night
satin sheets tangled at our feet
pillow drenched with our scent
clinging tightly to our love...
hot trumpet playing in our head
sliding hands along the keyboard
striking some chords..click click clicking
striking some chords..click click clicking
slow and easy bay....be..
slow and easy
somewhere in between here and there
between love and paradise we dance
between love and paradise we dance
somewhere in between here and there
slow and easy bay..be..
slow and easy
we dance to the rhythm of jazz
posted for dVerse writing some Jazz
That is a beautifully sensual dance. I am listening to some jazz right now... your verses perfectly suited it. I liked the ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you HO for visiting and your comment. Always appreciated.
Deleteslow and easy babe...ha... i need someone to remind me constantly as well of this...smiles... i like the between here and there...the journey character..the space we move and the tempi matters much...right..
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia,
DeleteThank you for visiting and the great comment. Sometimes we just need to slow down and feel the beat.
This is a perfect song - you have the refrain and everything. A most lustful dance - from the silky smoothness of the first stanza to the more urgent heat of the second.
ReplyDeleteMarina,
DeleteThank you so much for the thoughtful comment, I am glad you enjoyed my song.
mmm nice rhythm, change of tempo & underlying sensuality in this....making a little jazz music. ha.
ReplyDeleteBrian,
DeleteHow are you my friend? Thanks for the visit always a pleasure.
Oh, I can hear the sultry tones of a Rosemary Clooney here. I love the refrain. This needs to be recorded.
ReplyDeleteHi Debi,
DeleteThank you so much I appreciate your support.
Enjoyed all the details you included to set the scene. I could ALMOST hear that trumpet playing as I read your piece.
ReplyDeleteMary,
DeleteAlways a pleasure to see you here and I always enjoy reading your responses. Hope you have a great day.
damn, you sure let loose a tune
ReplyDeleteThat could make any swoon
Think I need to take a cold shower now
Between here and there may happen some how
Pat,
DeleteSo glad you liked my tune
would be nice to dance
under a full moon..
Dance you say?
DeleteWell i suppose some sort of dance I could do at my bay
The breaking in kind
Oh never mind lol
Dance, I did say to sleep
Deleteperchance to dream..breaking
in new ideas...lol..
Love this line, "somewhere in between here and there,between love and paradise we dance" Enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteKen,
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read.
Oh, yeah... we were on the same page for this one. Something about the sax just drives me crazy.
ReplyDeleteLaurie,
DeleteI agree the sax is one smooth instrument that has that intensity to stir things up a bit...
Oh, so nice and tender song in jazzy tone...love it
ReplyDeleteHi humbird,
DeleteThanks so much for the read and reply...
Cannot be a jazz night without the sax. Cool rendition Trudessa! Nicely!
ReplyDeleteHank
Good Morning Hank,
DeleteThanks for visiting! Yes, the sax is a big part of the jazz sound and what a sound it is..so enjoyable.
Seductive and sensual - I can hear the brushes on the cymbals and that sax player is gearing up for his moment in the spotlight.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,
DeleteThanks for the cool comment I think I can hear the brushes as well as I wait for the sax to play it's song.
What beautiful and sensual images! And you've engaged all the senses! I used to try to get that concept across to my third graders ~ couldn't have used this as an example though! LOL Thanks for sharing these jazzy lines.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning,
DeleteThank you for the visit and the great comment as I am smiling. Perhaps, this is not the best example for young minds. Hope you are drying out at your place and the sun is smiling again.
hi truedesssa my name is Albert is an honor to redad you kisses
ReplyDeleteHello Albert,
DeleteThanks for reading..