Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Blue Side of My Heart



















Sleeping, silently you  creep in soft rain
awakening  dreams,  hidden in my mind
sending rapid messages through my brain
opening windows, slowly pulling  blinds

light shines into the blue side of my heart
gentle reflections loving thoughts of you
sculpting heavenly bodies abstract art
longing for that touch,  unity  of two

tender words etched across an inky sky
wandering souls discovering new  dreams
beneath cosmic stars, breathless lovers sigh
beautiful verses, misty eyes tears stream

drifting into dark  shadows , sounds of night
transcending time and space lovers takes flight

posted for dVerse - a sonnet

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36 comments:

  1. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 11, 2014

    Cosmic love! I like it

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      Hi Alex,

      Thanks for visiting..glad you liked it..

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  2. brudbergFebruary 11, 2014

    A sonnet of true love... really great... I like to have the love captured between dream and reality.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      Bjorn, thanks there is a nice hidden place between dream and reality..

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  3. Brian MillerFebruary 11, 2014

    smiles...a lovely love sonnet...i rather like the writing of it across the sky for all to see....there is passion in this as well...which def allows it to take flight...

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      Hi Brian,

      Thanks as always for you unending support..it is always appreciated.

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  4. ScarletFebruary 11, 2014

    Wow, what a beautiful sonnet on love ~ Wishing you Happy Hearts Day ~

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  5. MaryFebruary 11, 2014

    This is lovely, Truedessa. I enjoyed the idea of 'inky words etched across an inky sky.' Beautiful visual really.

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  6. WolfsrosebudFebruary 11, 2014

    i do like tender words against an inky sky... lovely piece... like a whisper

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      Hello,

      Thank you whispers in the night air against an inky sky..

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  7. Pat HattFebruary 11, 2014

    Two as one
    Some universe fun
    If it is nice
    And doesn't make one pay the price
    A few words tender to the heart
    Can sure lead to art
    Two spread out in the sky
    Spirits soaring high

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      The universe is full of allure
      full of mysteries that I am sure
      life sometimes taking detours
      but, at new heights the air is pure

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    2. Pat HattFebruary 11, 2014

      If only those heights were near
      High above the turning sphere
      Forgetting all the rest
      Just filled with zest

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    3. Blue GrumpsterFebruary 26, 2014

      I was just wondering... do you reckon breathless cats sigh too?

      I love this poem even if I'm incredibly biased. :)

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 11, 2014

    Beautiful imagery and emotion in this lovely piece, my friend.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 11, 2014

      Hi Sherry,

      So nice to see you hear my friend. How are you?

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  9. ClaudiaFebruary 11, 2014

    i like the blue side of the heart and the weightless feel of the verse... lovely

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  10. John (@bookdreamer)February 12, 2014

    Always good to see forms used

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 12, 2014

      Fun to use at times..especially love sonnets..

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  11. Vandana SharmaFebruary 12, 2014

    nice flight to be in their own world

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  12. GabriellaFebruary 12, 2014

    Beautiful romantic sonnet, Truedessa! I like it all the more as blue is my favorite color.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 12, 2014

      Thank you Gabriella, well I tend to be blue so it works for me..

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  13. Myrna R.February 12, 2014

    This is beautiful. I like the imaginative description of love here, blue, in a dream, in the sky, it flies.
    Just lovely.

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 14, 2014

      Myrna - thank you for your lovely comment..

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  14. Victoria`February 12, 2014

    This has such a mystical feel to it. Makes me want to go take a nap!

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    1. TruedessaFebruary 14, 2014

      To nap and to perhaps dream..wishing you restful sleep

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  15. LauraFebruary 12, 2014

    Beautiful, dreamy love poem.

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  16. ayalaFebruary 12, 2014

    I love it :) Lovely!

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2014

    Beautiful and dreamy! I loved it! Thank you! :-)

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