Wednesday, April 22, 2015

Traveling with the Sun and Moon




we are the  children of the  earth 
traveling with  the sun  and  moon
seeking our destiny since  birth
we are the  children  of the  earth 
warming hearts by a dancing hearth
natural  beauty our heads swoon 
we are the  children  of the  earth 
traveling with  the sun  and  moon

posted for dVerse -  writing an 8 line
poem about travel. Form Triolet
sharing with Poets United for Earth Day 
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42 comments:

  1. GailApril 22, 2015

    I do like "We are the children of the earth..." and the repetition of that double line just made it more powerful.

    Thanks for visiting and leaving your kind comment.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Hi Gail, you are welcome I enjoy visiting your place.

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  2. UnknownApril 22, 2015

    Nice form! Few things better than traveling with the sun and the moon.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Yeah, you have to love traveling with the sun and moon..ah..

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  3. brudbergApril 23, 2015

    I think travelling with sun and moon is better than burning gasoline, great tribute to Earth day.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Thanks Bjorn - I am fascinated by the heavens..

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  4. AnonymousApril 23, 2015

    I like it. The repetition works really well. And a fitting write for the Earth Day. :-)
    -HA

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  5. Vandana SharmaApril 23, 2015

    and one day we will get absorbed in it too, returning back to our oriigin

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  6. BlogorattiApril 23, 2015

    Happy Earth Day, nice piece!

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  7. DEZMONDApril 23, 2015

    Long live Mother Earth!

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  8. Sumana RoyApril 23, 2015

    a beautiful triolet..

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  9. Alex J. CavanaughApril 23, 2015

    And that fit beautifully with Earth Day.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      I had to write something to honor the day..

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  10. ayalaApril 23, 2015

    Beautiful! Perfect poem for Earth day!

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  11. Pat HattApril 23, 2015

    Perfect for Earth day, as we travel with the two come what may

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Traveling come what may on any given day..

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  12. AnonymousApril 23, 2015

    Isn't it sad that every day isn't Earth day.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      That is true if only we could carry that peace and respect for our planet each and every day..

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  13. Sherry Blue SkyApril 23, 2015

    Oh how I love this. I love the triolet form and so resonate with "we are the children of the earth traveling with the sun and moon." Great comfort and beauty there.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Hi Sherry,

      Thanks, I find comfort in that as I sing it sometimes..

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  14. claireyloveApril 23, 2015

    "we are the children of the earth
    traveling with the sun and moon"
    what a beautiful and thought provoking refrain!

    www.claireylovelearns.wordpress.com

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  15. Katie Mia FrederickApril 23, 2015

    Truly to literally travel as
    humans in the golden spiral
    flow of moving like planets
    around Suns.. is a way to truly
    be one with Nature.. in balance
    tRuly wOnE.. without rules of
    Culture.. Innate instinct..and
    Intuition flows win iNOW..:)

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Hi,

      I really enjoyed reading your response..you always see deep into the sphere..

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  16. GraceApril 23, 2015

    We are indeed children of the earth ~ Lovely triolet Truedessa ~

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  17. Myrna R.April 23, 2015

    Nice how you were able to respond to both prompts with this lovely triolet.

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    1. TruedessaApril 23, 2015

      Thanks Myrna it just sort of fit together...

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  18. Sanaa RizviApril 23, 2015

    This is an amazing triolet...! :D
    xoxo

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  19. MaryApril 24, 2015

    I enjoyed the flow of this, Truedessa. Yes, we are children of the earth. If only we would take better care.

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  20. WolfsrosebudApril 25, 2015

    ... and as children maybe we should grow-up and take care of it

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  21. C.C.April 25, 2015

    Beautiful.....this reminds me of a poem that may have come from oral tradition and been passed down from generation to generation in spoken form as part of cultural history.

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  22. tonyonOctober 19, 2015

    when aliens will come to Earth: goodbye religion and all its lies

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  23. tonyonOctober 19, 2015

    (1)...interstellar travel (aliens in Moon?)...are there aliens in Moon´s occult face?, perhaps they could be go to/come from faraway in straight line beyond occult face, for not to be detected from Earth... It´s something strange that NASA cancelled the 2 last Apollo missions when they were in all prepared for launch to Moon... Why astronauts when came back from Moon they were stay silent so?. Why NASA has not gone to Moon from ½ century ago?...economic reasons?, "lack of interest"?...or, the Evil Empire: religion, armies, monarchies and politicians...are the causers too, besides of wars, besides control of all global media (thousands million of "believers": bribed, or innocents, or ignorant...when aliens will come to Earth: goodbye religion and all its lies...for that reason there are religious piteous, intimidating to ignorant, TV programs and movies presenting supposed aliens "grey", "reptilian", etc, as or "enemies", if religious would not so damaging; be careful, religious go saying in "their" global media that "3th World War has already begun"...because Humankind escapes from them and go to Future; they would give a pity)...

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  24. tonyonOctober 20, 2015

    (2)...interstellar travel (aliens in Moon?)... and Evil Empire are hiding the truth to People, to continue "forever and ever" with their religious lies living from the People´s Work and do not changes actually anything in World: religion, poverty, violence, ignorance... People say (ufo TV) was detected in Space an alien spacecraft with 800 kms! Size... Can to have, near, aliens yes, or aliens not (in Universe of course there are a great quantity of Intelligent Beings like us... Tales "Star Wars" with aliens: NO thanks, if aliens could come to Earth they still are superior Intelligent Beings and therefore good people... Before, to avoid migrations by inequality, was climbed by the same the standard life level around the Planet, it was easy: 1 only united Planet without Nations, without Wars and without Frontiers, cities only, with only 1 World Government, 1 single Flag and 1 single new World Army...), but... The face of the Moon...really seems a face, no other satellite in Solar System has that human appearance...is like...if it would look us... By chance?, or...aliens a very long time ago did it... The Earth is only a sand grain on beach of the Universe...exterior Space calls us...

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