Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Gravitational Dance















 

heavenly skies under moonlight, I drift
gravitational force, draws me to you
magnetic attraction, clouds slowly lift
heavenly skies under moonlight, I drift
two hearts pulsating, love a precious gift
in a magical world, dreams do come true
heavenly skies under moonlight, I drift
gravitational force, draws me to you



posted for Poets United
writing about Gravity

pic credit: unknown artist


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23 comments:

  1. Pat HattOctober 21, 2015

    Such a drawing and lifting up, sure is a gift in a golden cup. The pic is great too.

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  2. MaryOctober 21, 2015

    Yes, sometimes I think that there MUST be a gravitational force that draws one to the one loved! Nicely penned.

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  3. Sanaa RizviOctober 21, 2015

    Love this! Such a magical piece :D :D

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughOctober 21, 2015

    Love is a precious gift!

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  5. BlogorattiOctober 21, 2015

    Outstanding piece, and the photo is apt.

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  6. tonispencerOctober 21, 2015

    Lovely piece. It seems we both went on the same theme. I truly do believe some of us are drawn to the loved one. Spencer is Kanzensakura

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  7. kaykualaOctober 21, 2015

    There is that force unseen but felt. The same force that starts innocent enough but ends up with marriage vows! Wonderful lines Truedessa!

    Hank

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  8. AnonymousOctober 21, 2015

    Love is indeed a precious gift!

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  9. SusanOctober 21, 2015

    Oh yes! A gravitational dance needs at least two, and when it's the right two the attraction feels so natural and blessed.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 21, 2015

    Oh this is so beautiful. A cool way to think of gravitational force.

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  11. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 22, 2015

    It moves like a dance. :)

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  12. claireyloveOctober 22, 2015

    How romantic and dreamy :)

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  13. brudbergOctober 22, 2015

    Lovely attraction.. a force that cannot be avoided... :-)

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  14. Blue GrumpsterOctober 22, 2015

    Yes, love is a precious gift, True.

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  15. Jae RoseOctober 22, 2015

    Sometimes the world works with us and for us - maybe it always does but we only know when we truly open our eyes...a magical poem

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  16. HannahOctober 22, 2015

    Floating in a womb of the great magnetic pull...utterly lovely!

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  17. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerOctober 22, 2015

    Beautifully penned!

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  18. Gen Giggles October 22, 2015

    Love is so like that.

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  19. UnknownOctober 23, 2015

    Nothing better than magnetism to bring two into alignment. Sooo romantic

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  20. klahanieOctober 23, 2015

    Hey Truedessa,

    More gravity in your poem than anything Isaac Newton could of dreamt of :)

    A peaceful day and night to you.

    Gary

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  21. Myrna R.October 25, 2015

    Very romantic. I like the drifting and the pull of love. Nice.

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  22. ClaudiaOctober 25, 2015

    this made me smile... nicely romantic - and made me think of an einstein quote - Gravitation cannot be held responsible for people falling in love.
    smiles

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