Sunrise arrives
over the
mountaintops
awakening in a
new day
Songs from a wooden flute
float on morning
breath
as darkness
slips away
In burst of orange and yellow
shedding human
skin
transformation
begins
A warrior's vision takes form
arms, grow
mighty wings
feet sharp talons
honing in on perception
dawning of
awareness
dreams take
flight
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Wonderful work here .. it truly does seem like a warrior in that petroglyph.
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
I really like the formation of the warrior's vision....and contemplating the dreams he might have had!
ReplyDeleteI specially love this part:
ReplyDeleteA warrior's vision takes form
arms, grow mighty wings
feet sharp talons
and love the title too ~
A warrior or a hunter...could be either - love your interpretation :)
ReplyDeleteAn evolution of sorts! One can never be sure that man can take flight to the skies in the ancient days. Thoughtful thoughts Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteHank
The transformation of night to day, sleeping dreams to waking dreams worth pursuing.
ReplyDeleteAh.. ancestral realm when reality
ReplyDeleteof oneness with nature and origin
as one is all the same.. where
humans innately instinctually
intuitively feel and know
that we can run
with the reindeer
and fly as a
firebird one
and same..
separation
is hell.. now..
unity
is heaven then..
forgotten but
not impossible
to still remember
now.. for the
free of
US..:)
The evolution is what it takes to get from point A to that dream
ReplyDeleteGorgeous.
ReplyDeleteOh! I love the surprise transformation in your poem, True...such an imaginative response!
ReplyDeleteI love it, especially "dreams take flight." Very beautiful writing, my friend.
ReplyDeleteLove this: Songs from a wooden flute
ReplyDeletefloat on morning breath
as darkness slips away...... I can hear that lovely sound.
"dawning of awareness"
ReplyDelete"dreams take flight"
Perhaps to bring our dreams to fruition there first has to be awareness. Love your poem, Truedessa.
Somehow I'm still waiting for the dawning of my own awareness.
ReplyDeleteP.S. True, do you know Gary? I told him the three of us should start The Moody Blue Yet Trying To Be Positive Club. He's wondering how you feel about this concept. Where? HERE.
Hi Blue,
DeleteYes, I know Gary- The Moody Blue Yet Trying To Be Positive Club? I will check it out.