Dreaming beneath a twilight sky
my heart and soul caught
in a handwoven net of love
your voice whispers in my
ear in a gentle
b.r.e.e.z.e
swaying to the rhythm
of life, my lips
forming
words I need to say
wishing upon a star
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writing poetry
using 44 words
key word breeze
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Hi,
DeleteThat is a lovely comment and I see you are still not short on words. Much appreciated!
Simply gorgeous. Goodness.
ReplyDeleteThanks De!
DeleteI just love this. That hand woven net of love....this is just so wonderful in so many ways.
ReplyDeleteThank you Toni
DeleteI do love that whisper. Some things should not be said aloud.
ReplyDeleteBjorn, That is true somethings are meant to be spoken in soft whispers.
DeleteReally nice! Wonderful flow.
ReplyDeleteThank Alex - ebb and flow of the oceans tides
DeleteWonderful. Love the image love the words! Swaying with you here...
ReplyDeleteThanks! Find that star and make a wish!
DeleteA little whisper between two, throw in some fine swaying too.
ReplyDeleteWhispers in the night! Shhh..
DeleteGentle and soft, I am wishing upon a star, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteI like to star gaze and wait for that first star and make a wish and blow it into the wind.
Deletelove the phrase "handwoven net of love". Like the hammock in your picture might have been woven by hand, so true love is something that is truly hand-woven over time.
ReplyDeleteHi Bryan,
DeleteI agree love is unique so I think it would be hand woven.
"swaying to the rhythm of life" -- lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sasha - I think one just has to catch the beat in life
DeleteI like the way you used "breeze" as a whisper. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mish
DeleteHey Truedessa,
ReplyDeleteHow soothing, my poetic friend. Now then, it's "Hammock Time!" "Can't touch this (oh-oh oh oh oh-oh-oh)
Can't touch this (oh-oh oh oh oh-oh-oh)"
Gary,
DeleteOk, you made me laugh it's Hammock Time
Go with the flow in a spin if you can't move to this
Then you probably are dead
So wave your hands in the air
Bust through the moves run your fingers through your hair
Read more: MC Hammer - U Can't Touch This Lyrics | MetroLyrics
Lovely! Such a tender extended metaphor, exquisitely expressed.
ReplyDeleteHi Wendy,
DeleteThank you!
Perfect moment!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletemy lips forming
ReplyDeletewords I need to say
wishing upon a star
How powerful can be the influence of love be on one's mind. Words may not be able to really express the feeling. Rightly so True!
Hank
Hank, sometimes the words just don't come out quite right.
DeleteSuch a lovely ambiance. You totally transported me.
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal
DeleteI love it. It takes me to another place... a place where I need a hammock built for two and a clear, starry night.
ReplyDeleteWell, you have to admire those starry nights.
DeleteSo dreamy and lovely. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry,
DeleteWe need to catch up later this week!
Oh I love this. I felt like I was the one swaying.
ReplyDeleteHi Sandra,
DeleteThanks for visiting.
Very gentle and soft. Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I was in a thoughtful mood..
DeleteAh, sweet!
ReplyDeleteAh thanks :)
DeleteThe image of a hammock goes perfectly with your verse.
ReplyDeleteThanks I wrote the poem first and then tried to find a pic to compliment the writing.
DeleteI love the "breeze"...such a lovely poem :) and a perfect picture for it.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I hope you are doing well it has been some time since we conversed.
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