secrets
hidden treasure
offerings of my heart
unlock the mystery with me
find love
~
my dreams
heartfelt desires
you my hidden secret
mysteries uncovered in night
find me
posted for Poets United
writing about secrets
Oh I absolutely adore the form you have chosen to give us this stunning poem :D Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Beautiful job here with the prompt and the form!
ReplyDeleteTwo lovely cinquain, Enjoyed!!!
ReplyDeletemuch love...
you have given the secret that elusive quality that only lovers understand.
ReplyDeleteLovely verse
I imagine those dreams float on dragon wings...
ReplyDeleteOn dragon wings a heart does fly!
DeleteIt's a seductive invitation, and secrets could definitely be treasure.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a very beautiful secret.
ReplyDeleteaw...sometimes secrets are absolutely 'sweetness' itself...
ReplyDeleteVery tempting and seductive.
ReplyDeleteMysterious and beautiful. You are such a words crafter.
ReplyDeleteThis as well makes you ponder - do we keep secrets in the hope people will find out - i think we all have a desire to be found
ReplyDeleteyou my hidden secret
ReplyDeletemysteries uncovered in night
Nice to have someone around for protection. Though sometimes the advantage may not be seen readily! Nice little jingle Truedesa!
Hank
A dream like that allows secrets but sure reveals them too
ReplyDeleteI like this. It's quite an invitation to be known, seen, to be loved.
ReplyDeleteMyrna, you're here! As soon as I landed on this blog, I thought of you.
DeleteOoh! I like it. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
I'm so glad I'm not looking for love, having been married for 44 years now, and finally gotten all of my desire for other women out of my system.
ReplyDeleteI'm on my way. I might actually find you, you know? ;)
ReplyDeletehaha - well give me a call first :)
DeleteA treasure chest of possibilities. Secrets hidden in a loving ethos of wanderlust magical travels...
ReplyDeleteGary, Gary, nary contrary :)
Gary Gary,
DeleteI see you have found your way to my humble blog. How are you my dear friend?
Truedessa, Truedessa,
DeleteYour blog is almost as humble as mine! I'm not too bad, thank you. I'm in the process of actually replying to your email. My excuse is that I've been rather busy. A hectic time over here.
Gary, Gary, nary contrary :)
Gary Gary,
DeleteYou busy who would've knew as you write all hours of the night. I replied to said email.
Humility is what keeps us grounded, unless you have a dragon spirit and can take flight at will...
Truly beautiful, and the images it conjures!
ReplyDeleteSo often heartfelt desires ARE a secret...but one hopes they will come to pass.
ReplyDeleteI love this. I'm still learning secrets about my wife, even after all these years. It's awesome.
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