drizzle me with honey coated kisses
licking syllables from my lips, our
words dancing tongue to tongue
together perfecting the art of poetry
falling in free verse slower than the rain
catching our breath in the next refrain
hearts beating to a rhythmical cadence
posted for dVerse
writing Quadrille #30
using the word drizzle
and it must consists of
44 words
Ah! The sexiness of poetry. Isn't it thrilling? I've felt that rush so many times reading others poetry. This works beautifully.
ReplyDeleteNice description of words dancing tongue to tongue in their kisses.
ReplyDeleteDelicious words!
ReplyDeleteFanning myself - and applauding.
ReplyDeleteSo sensual and honey sweet! I love the lines:
ReplyDelete'licking syllables from my lips, our
words dancing tongue to tongue'.
With a dance like that sure can get the juices flowing indeed
ReplyDeleteA real sensuous dance with words :)
ReplyDeleteLong since I've had such a kiss ... but it's nice to recall! Thank you
ReplyDeleteHoney coated kisses, love the sensual kiss Truedessa !
ReplyDeletelove the thought of kissing words of the mouth I tell my love I want to feel his smile on his lips and he thinks thats so romantic too, i loved the beauty of your words
ReplyDeleteExpressed like a true romantic. Dream on...
ReplyDeleteYes!
ReplyDeleteWow, wonderfully romantic.
ReplyDeleteA sweet blend of poetry and love. I especially like...
ReplyDelete"falling in free verse slower than the rain
catching our breath in the next refrain"