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Stroking lovingly ebony & ivory keys
my heart softly composes a spring waltz
pink cherry blossoms, blooming in trees
finding harmony in my deepest thoughts
my heart softly composes a spring waltz
tingling vibrations, writing down notes
finding harmony in my deepest thoughts
in a gentle breeze a melody softly floats
tingling vibrations, writing down notes
tu(lips) dancing, romancing the night
in a gentle breeze a melody softly floats
playing a song into the morning light
tu(lips) dancing, romancing the night
pink cherry blossoms, blooming in trees
playing a song into the morning light
stroking lovingly ebony & ivory keys
posted for The Sunday Muse
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This is so beautiful - full of spring blossoms, romance and music. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to the beauty of spring.
DeleteIt is the heart that composes and writes the songs. I love the harmony and true beauty of music that is flowing here Truedessa! Sweet and full of the hope spring holds.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the wonderful phot prompt.
DeleteIs this a modified villanelle or some other form? The repetition beautifully enhances the substance … and it's top to bottom reversal of lines SINGS. Gosh, I'm delighted. Thank you!
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DeleteHi Susan,
DeleteThe form I used it a Pantoum, I haven't written one in a while but, I thought it might work well for what I was thinking.
Thank you for asking.
That has a beautiful rhythm and flow in both words and images.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex, you are always supportive.
DeleteYou brought the image to living, vibrant color! Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen
Delete(tu)lips... very clever way of drawing out the romance and spring in this lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you I wanted to combine the magic of both.
DeleteI can hear it,lovely tunes. Did you know that if you compose on a keyboard that it will write down the notes that you use. Just like my ditties that I write here on my Galaxy 8 smart phone does for my poem compositions. I learned piano as an adult by taking Class Piano 101 and 102 at my community college where I taught. You could do that, they have fine teachers.
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Hi Jim,
DeleteThank you for that information. I wonder if the community college around here offers Piano. I might have to look into that.
Lovely Pantoum
ReplyDeleteA great flow as you give those keys a go. Things sure spring more in spring.
ReplyDelete(tu)lips dancing (THAT is ingenious)
ReplyDeleteI recognized your Pantoum right off the bat! I tried the form a few times myself it was fun. Lovely work!
ReplyDeletefinding harmony in my deepest thoughts...
ReplyDeleteI love it, True. Just love it.