Sunday, October 3, 2021

Compact


The Sunday Muse

 

 You found my eyes alluring

my glossy lips tantalizing

you thought I'd fit perfectly

into your packed life

 

A small city suited you best

driving the newest compact car

conjuring big plans but, your

vision was limited, perhaps

the neon lights were blinding

 

I, on the other hand,  needed

room to grow,  space to wander

riding a mustang bareback

wild and free

my hair blowing in the breeze

 

A small house with a vast view

 trees as tall as the city skyline

 the only gleam at night

would be twinkling starlight

 

You never saw past the mirror

image,  did you ever take the

time to  look into my eyes

 

Wiping the heavy mascara

that obstructed my view

leaving a smeared lip kiss

on  my compact , tossing

it on the bed....

 

A compressed goodbye, you'll find

me living a full life with plenty

of room to roam...out on the

prairie or in the woodlands

spiritually growing the

heartland inside

 

linking with the The Sunday Muse

 Thank you for visiting  

author's note:  I felt she had a bigger story
so, here she is  at the crosswalk

27 comments:

  1. The compact metaphor here is deep and wonderful Truedessa! I love the lines and the message they hold.

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    1. Thank you Carrie for the comment and all you do to keep the Muse going.

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  2. I love that she stayed true to herself, out where she could ride wild and free. Yay.

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    1. The image with the odd reflection made me feel it wasn’t who she really was…

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  3. Sad when two people don't share the same vision for life.

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    1. It is sad but, then some people don’t try.

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  4. Luv the way you used the compact in its restricting quality

    Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

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  5. Not everything is meant to be. Sad but true.

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  6. Sometimes love can't survive difference and need. Great Write!

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  7. I like the way "compact" works its way through all the images!

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    1. Thanks gbit, I just started thinking about how people are compacting their lives due to covid and some are realizing new needs.

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  8. Funny, man rides in it while a lady has it all the while in her purse! Wonderful write, True!

    Hank

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  9. Oops, stay away from the pockets. Purses are much better, they open more easily. I love riding in my top-down Mustang, glad you mentioned that. You also gave us a fine ride here too, a fine read I liked.
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    1. Thanks Jim, I always wanted a convertible but, it’s not really practical here with harsh winters. I settle for a sun roof or moon roof. I never quite understood the difference. Lol…

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  10. Sounds like she's found freedom from the image someone else sees. Wonderfully written.

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    1. I felt she had a deeper story so, I gave her one. The beauty of writing.

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  11. Truedessa, your poem reads like a rock opera. Love how she wipes away the mascara and leaves a smudged lip imprint on the compact she tosses on the bed before she leaves...

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    1. Haha Your comment made me smile.! Thank you for that.

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  12. Love your use of compact throughout. She has the better life!

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  13. I love how you turned the image into a treatise on the compact mirror!! Beautiful writing!

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