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Sing me a lover's song
poetry in the street
one that makes me swoon
feel the rhythm of my heart
beat after precious beat
your guitar heats the night
flushed in fiery sunset
singing and clapping
take my hand, dance with me
a dusk we won't forget
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hosted by Grace writing a Flamenca
not sure how I did, but at least I tried...
Very nicely done, Truedessa, and I love the alliterative ‘flushed in fiery sunset’!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim, this was a new form for me but, I decided to give it a whirl.
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ReplyDeleteflushed in fiery sunset"... this is so beautiful! Your poem flows effortlessly... and the form is not easy. Great take ont he prompt!
Miriam thank you for reading and commenting. The form is definitely not an easy one.
DeleteThat's a fun one!
ReplyDeleteA dance to entice my muse. Hope you have a fun weekend.
DeleteLove the energy and movements specially this part. your guitar heats the night
ReplyDeleteflushed in fiery sunset
singing and clapping
Thanks for hosting Grace an interesting form to try.
DeleteLovely ❤️
ReplyDeleteAh, this one's a delight, the rhythm perfectly suiting the subject.
ReplyDeleteLove this❤
ReplyDeletePlease read my post
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