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There is an emptiness within
a hunger that cannot be satisfied
it rumbles deep under the skin
a heart that has been blindsided
feeding on poetic words amplified
when will the joys of spring begin
feasting on dandelions hillside
there is an emptiness within
dVerse Q242 Hunger
hosted by Lisa
writing a 44 word quadrille incorporating the word "hunger"
Beautifully done! :)
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That really strikes a poetic chord for me.
Truedessa, I like the collection of lines you have here, and there is an easy way to switch them around where they still stand in cohesion. Very cool.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is beautiful, yet sad! That yearning for something more. The blindsided heart never rests in peace it seems.
ReplyDeleteMay spring fill it with buttercups, baby geese, birdsong and sunny mornings.
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