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Autumn’s palette of terracotta, mustard and rust
the old pickup left a trail of dust
An eagle soars high above the tall pine trees
gone are the stings of bees
A moose quietly makes his own tracks
trees fall with the sound of an axe
Squirrels gathering nuts for winter
a woodsman has a splinter
The secluded cabin is warm and cozy
in the darkness howls a coyote
written for dVerse Poetry Form - hosted by Grace
This week, break the couple. Write a poem incorporating one of these couplets.
Choose one:
Broken Couplet — disrupt the expected relationship between the two lines.
Split Couplet — experiment with a longer first line and a shorter second line.
Hinged Couplet — let the second line turn, transform, or change the meaning of the first.
I love all the contrasting images and couplets Trudessa, I can almost hear the coyotes at the end of the poem! beautiful work, Truedessa! 💚
ReplyDeleteThank you Cara, I tried to catch a glimpse of autumn in the mountains.
DeleteGreat use of colour and contrast, especially sound and movement in these lines, Truedessa:
ReplyDelete‘A moose quietly makes his own tracks
trees fall with the sound of an axe’.
Thanks Kim, autumn is upon us.
DeleteVery creative color description!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex
Deletea wonderful bundle of charming images, held together with strings of rhyme
ReplyDeleteThanks Eric, I do love a string of rhymes.
DeleteLove the contrast between beuty and ugly... each couplet a separate little story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn, I like that each comment of each having a separate little story.
DeleteAn interesting form I havent encountered till now. I love the palette of fall colours.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry, I hope you are enjoying the fall palette out your way.
DeleteYou paint lovely vignettes of fall with your couplets, Truedessa.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lynn for visiting and leaving a comment.
DeleteI love the way you describe autumn as such a warm and cozy season. You included such wonderful details!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary - Autumn is starting to show its colors here.
DeleteAnd here too, though barely!
DeleteI love autumn's palette. This couplet is my favorite one:
ReplyDeleteA moose quietly makes his own tracks
trees fall with the sound of an axe
Grace - Thank you for hosting and the interesting prompt.
DeleteAutumn’s palette of terracotta, mustard and rust
ReplyDeletethe old pickup left a trail of dust
Great opening True! The varied golden shades (terracotta, mustard and rust) immediately brought the Autumn colours to the fore. Love the write!
Hank
Hank, Thanks my friend for visiting it always brings a smile to my face.
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