Thursday, October 1, 2026

Autumn's Arrival

Courtesy of Pixabay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Autumn’s palette of terracotta, mustard and rust
the old pickup left a trail of dust

An eagle soars high above the tall pine trees
gone are the stings of bees

A moose quietly makes his own tracks
trees fall with the sound of an axe

Squirrels gathering nuts for winter
a woodsman has a splinter

The secluded cabin is warm and cozy
in the darkness howls a coyote

written for dVerse Poetry Form - hosted by Grace 

This week, break the couple.    Write a poem incorporating one of these couplets.

Choose one:
Broken Couplet — disrupt the expected relationship between the two lines.

Split Couplet — experiment with a longer first line and a shorter second line.

Hinged Couplet — let the second line turn, transform, or change the meaning of the first.

21 comments:

  1. I love all the contrasting images and couplets Trudessa, I can almost hear the coyotes at the end of the poem! beautiful work, Truedessa! 💚

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    1. Thank you Cara, I tried to catch a glimpse of autumn in the mountains.

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  2. Great use of colour and contrast, especially sound and movement in these lines, Truedessa:
    ‘A moose quietly makes his own tracks
    trees fall with the sound of an axe’.

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  3. Very creative color description!

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  4. a wonderful bundle of charming images, held together with strings of rhyme

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    1. Thanks Eric, I do love a string of rhymes.

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  5. Love the contrast between beuty and ugly... each couplet a separate little story.

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    1. Thanks Bjorn, I like that each comment of each having a separate little story.

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  6. An interesting form I havent encountered till now. I love the palette of fall colours.

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    1. Hi Sherry, I hope you are enjoying the fall palette out your way.

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  7. You paint lovely vignettes of fall with your couplets, Truedessa.

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    1. Thank you Lynn for visiting and leaving a comment.

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  8. I love the way you describe autumn as such a warm and cozy season. You included such wonderful details!

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    1. Thank you Mary - Autumn is starting to show its colors here.

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    2. And here too, though barely!

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  9. I love autumn's palette. This couplet is my favorite one:

    A moose quietly makes his own tracks
    trees fall with the sound of an axe

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    1. Grace - Thank you for hosting and the interesting prompt.

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  10. Autumn’s palette of terracotta, mustard and rust
    the old pickup left a trail of dust

    Great opening True! The varied golden shades (terracotta, mustard and rust) immediately brought the Autumn colours to the fore. Love the write!

    Hank

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    1. Hank, Thanks my friend for visiting it always brings a smile to my face.

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