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Art by Catrin
Welz-Stein You held my songs captive keeping my thoughts hidden but, love should be interactive dancing with life's inner rhythm
writing notes, pondering keys which will unlock inner dreams the stars and moonlight tease over the horizon, light redeems
my heart locked in a cage set it free, set it free, says the sage take a chance, on change
songbirds need freedom to sing which key will unlock the heart let's experience the beauty of spring we need to find a new place to start
opening the door to true happiness will you find the right note and key to fill the void of inner emptiness the songbirds need to be set free
my heart locked in a cage set it free, set it free, says the sage take a chance, on change
linking with The Sunday Muse author's note: playing around |
Beautiful, True. Art forms should be allowed to soar.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra, I agree
DeleteI love the lines about the songbirds needing to be set free...."set it free set it free says the sage" - beautifully done, True.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend. I hope you are well.
DeleteTruedessa this flows like a song, would love to hear it set to music.
ReplyDeleteI am not entirely satisfied with the piece, it may need a bit of re-arranging. Thank you for visiting. Much appreciated.
DeleteThe repetition of "set it free" echoes. A vibrant call to change.
ReplyDeleteA warrior call to unlock the cage...
Delete"set it free, set it free, says the sage"
ReplyDeleteYours are wise words Truedessa
Thanks for dropping by my blog today
Much love
Thank you Gillena. Have a peace filled week.
DeleteThere are many cages, but fortunately many keys.
ReplyDeleteYes, many cages/prisons but, who holds the master key? Just pondering
DeleteI love how you have captured and showcased the different pieces of the image Truedessa! A lovely message indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carrie, so may great choices today.
DeleteI like how it is now.
ReplyDeleteI have just been singing, and it's true... some keys open the door of emotions...
Thank you fir the feedback, i am still pondering a rearrangement.
DeleteSuch a lovely interpretation of the image ~~~~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. A cage is no place for a heart, but sometimes freeing it isn't easy.
ReplyDeleteAgree, a heart needs space to beat to its own drum. Set it free….
DeleteI feel like it would be fitting to turn this piece into a song!
ReplyDeleteI have a melody in my head.
Delete"take a chance on change" - It does sound like a song.
ReplyDeleteLove this!