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Struggling to grasp the larger end
no wish bone will bring you back
there are no words for me to send
within my heart lies a fragile crack
some skeletons never learn to bend
flexibility the key to bouncing back
no bones about it
linking with dVerse Poets Pub
writing a 44 word quadrille incorporating the word "bone"
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An enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteLove the multiple uses of the word. Well done!
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a small poem with big meaning. True, it resonates deeply with me.
ReplyDeleteSo poignant: No wish bone will bring you back. Ow.
ReplyDeleteA powerful reflection on the word(s) and the feelings it brings up - Jae
ReplyDeleteNice one!
ReplyDeletePondering flexibility,
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So much truth in your words, True! A very moving verse.
ReplyDeleteThought-provoking. I love the use of that phrase as last line; you have made it resonate with finality.
ReplyDeleteYour poem captures the oddness of that image well.
ReplyDeleteA meaningful quadrille, Truedessa, that got me thinking. I love the finality of ‘no bones about it’.
ReplyDeleteeric here. great use of wishbone.
ReplyDeleteA bonny bony poem, True, with a good deal of truth.
ReplyDeleteAs always, well done.
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