Tuesday, April 16, 2013

dVerse Aril 16, 2013

                                                   


Endless

she searches a sea of faceless people
seeking the face that touched her soul
 in darkness, he brings her light
his voice rocks her,  silent waves of emotions
lullaby of the heart...the ebb and flow of devotion
lost deep in the ocean of his eyes..nowhere to hide
reflective blue pools of time spent together
adrift  in the vast emptiness of surrounding water
a ship with no shore to bring her home
eerie sobs from the grey mist of yesterday
 haunting ghost roams her anguished body
 stroke of midnight, the phantom  arises
under a shadowy sky, he beckons her
come hither my lady, let us dance on the crest of desires
press your breasts to my chest, whispers of endearment
swaying beat of rhythmic hearts
remove your cloak, reveal your vulnerability
under the watchful eyes of a thousand stars
waves of affection inner tranquility
 gently riding the tides of endless love




Author's note: pic courtesy of 
 http://posmuara.blogspot.com/2013/01/ghost-ship-free-hd-wallpapers.html


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26 comments:

  1. ScarletApril 16, 2013

    Such a haunting write ~ I do like the passion in your words ~

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Grace,

      Thank you as always for your support and kind words.

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  2. Pat HattApril 16, 2013

    The pic is great
    And your words the same trait
    Those stars can watch
    Some reach for the scotch
    But some bare all
    And see the writing on the wall

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Pat,

      Thanks for the read
      you're a rare breed
      a friend of mine
      always there with a rhyme

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  3. mrs mediocrityApril 16, 2013

    This is wonderfully layered, sensual, mysterious, mythical.

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Thank you so much for reading and the reply.

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  4. AnonymousApril 16, 2013

    Lovely dream-like quality.

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  5. steveroniApril 16, 2013

    So many good lines in this.

    "...let us dance on the crest of desires
    press your breasts to my chest, whispers of endearment
    swaying beat of rhythmic hearts..."

    Makes me want to oil these joints, get out there, and dance the universal dance of all ages!

    Thanks for dropping by at Fourth Dimension...
    PEACE!

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Steve E,

      Thank you so much for your comments. I am glad you were moved by my words.

      It is always a pleasure to drop in at your site.

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  6. HisFireFlyApril 16, 2013

    "watchful eyes of a thousand stars"
    yes, all knowing, all seeing...

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Thank you for reading and the reply..yes all knowing, all seeing..

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  7. AnonymousApril 16, 2013

    A wonderful write. Mezmerizing!

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      charles,

      Thanks for stopping in to read and the thoughtful reply.

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  8. VictoriaApril 16, 2013

    You've captured that wonder of finding someone you love in a crowd. There is a lot of tenderness in this poem.

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    1. TruedessaApril 16, 2013

      Victoria,

      Thank you for your kind response.

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  9. ClaudiaApril 17, 2013

    in a sea of faceless people...great to find the one who means something and for whom we make ourselves vulnerable..

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    1. TruedessaApril 17, 2013

      Claudia,

      Thank you for the read and the reply.

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  10. TCPCApril 17, 2013

    wonderful! loved the verses that play so well to the pic!

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    1. TruedessaApril 17, 2013

      Akila,

      Thank you for the read and I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

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  11. Laurie KolpApril 17, 2013

    This is beautiful and dreamy... I love!

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    1. TruedessaApril 17, 2013

      Laurie

      Thank you so much for your kind words.

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  12. brudbergApril 17, 2013

    WHat a lovely romantic tale.

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    1. TruedessaApril 17, 2013

      Brudberg

      Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed the tale.

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  13. ayalaApril 17, 2013

    Lovely layers in this. Nicely penned.

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    1. TruedessaApril 17, 2013

      Ayala

      Thank you so much your support is appreciated.

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