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| photo by Ricardo Alves |
creamy white roses, indigo
sky
promises of everlasting
devotion
luscious scent, whispering
sighs
poetic verses, full of
emotion
flowering buds of
affection grow
romance blooming, garden of
love
white petals , blue misty
glow
soaring high on wings of a
dove
innocence , a lover's first kiss
collapsing within soft
moist skin
entwined in the arms of bliss
intoxicating aroma, world
spins
beyond the dark veil of
night
falling rose petals, white
satin
our spirits ascend, new
height
no greater love can we
imagine
Author's Note:
This work was a
collaboration with
Ricardo Alves from Brazil
who has
generously sent me this photograph
to interpret with my words. Thank
you Richardo it was my pleasure
to pen these verses to your beautiful
photo.
http://penseforadacaixa.com/
to interpret with my words. Thank
you Richardo it was my pleasure
to pen these verses to your beautiful
photo.
http://penseforadacaixa.com/
wow!!! Awesome rhymes..
ReplyDeleteYou've created something beautiful with your world of imagination. :)
Thanks for Visiting Charlie and for being first. Glad to meet you!
DeleteBeautiful words to a beautiful picture...
ReplyDeleteBjorn, I always appreciate your lovely comments..Thank you...
DeleteOh, so lovely & dreamy... picture and poem. I especially like the ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie..
Deletenice...both beautiful and play off each other well...the tenderness of such a love...i think most of us dream of just that....smiles...of this there could be no greater love...that is for sure...smiles.
ReplyDeleteGood Evening..Here we are at oln again and so nice to read your comment as you hop around..have a good night..
DeleteI love this collaboration; and what a beautiful love this poem expresses.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary,
DeleteWhen Richardo sent the picture it just spoke to me..thank you for your support always..
Beautiful picture & words ~ I can't write without images or pictures ~ The last stanza is specially uplifting ~
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
DeleteThanks for visiting..I usually write and then find a picture to compliment what I wrote but, in this case I used the photo
and then penned the verses on how I felt about the roses.
This is a remarkable treat for the senses--excellent work!
ReplyDeleteHello Nico, Thank you for the lovely comment.
DeleteA collaboration you couldn't pass by
ReplyDeleteAs the rose you were able to spy
When those buds take hold
Things can sure turn to pure gold
Hand in hand across the land
Making up ones own bora bora sand
That collapse would be nice too
Between me and you
A collaboration I couldn't pass
Deleteas the beautiful roses I did behold
speaking to me the language of love
hope we make it to the bora sand
as we travel by sea and by land
a new adventure I have planned...
A beautiful collaboration- full of beautiful colors and textures. A fine exploration of that first blush of new love.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning, thank you for the lovely words..
Deletenice...i like how this builds from the blossoming to soaring high... a beautiful pic as well...always cool to team up with someone
ReplyDeletethank you for your visit and yes this was indeed a fun collaboration such a beautiful picture and roses are one of my favorite themes to write about...
DeleteLovely imagery, both words and picture.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning Ginny, thank you so much!
Delete:) So beautiful and it touched me directly. This is the kind of poetry i like and try to write, Really very nice:) keep posting!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are very kind with your words and support ..thank you..
DeleteI like this poem Truedassa - both beautiful and romantic. A very nice poetic illustration of the photo.
ReplyDeleteGabriella thank you for taking the time to visit and leaving a lovely
Deletecomment.
Ah, white roses, my favourites. Great write.
ReplyDeleteJames, nice to see you again..thank you for returning the visit..I enjoyed your thought provoking piece as well.
Deletelovely words and images evoked, especially like the uplifting lilt to the rhythm of the poem
ReplyDeletethank you for reading and the uplifting reply..
DeleteLovely collabration, Truedessa.
ReplyDeletePamela
btw, I am not religious either.
Hi Pamela,
DeleteNice to see you again..thanks for visiting..interesting poem you had this week.
thank you for this lovely moment...
ReplyDeletericardo,
DeleteThank you my friend for sharing your work it was a lovely collaboration. You are most welcome..perhaps, we could do
this again.
Beautiful picture and words!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carl..
DeleteThe Carl comment is mine :)
ReplyDeleteayala, ok thanks for commenting..
DeleteThe poem and photo go so well together, both expressing the pristine wonder of true love.
ReplyDeleteBeth, thank you for such a lovely comment..
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