Dreams
fill two light hearted fools heads
navigating
between heaven & earth
our
stories woven, golden threads
adventures
waiting, tales giving birth
Celestial
body, silver stars dance
wooing
hearts, romance in the air
casting
spells, Truedessa in a trance
constellations
twinkling, solar flares
Blanket
of darkness, no place to hide
mystic
powers, soft ballad distance cry
glistening
moonbeams, ready to ride
Aquila
lights the misty evening sky
Pewter
wings soaring night hawk
Truedessa
caught in a giant claw
Captain
Pat's smile melts to a frown
drawing
his sword, clenching jaw
Calling
upon the powers, crystal skull
shooting
stars, fiery arrows in flight
soft
sighs, drifting in a momentary lull
declaring
an oath, we fight this night
Hawk clever disguise landing on the moon
cosmic
dust gleaming in his dark eyes
mystical
powers, playing bizarre tunes
Captain
Pat hears her haunting cries
Cat
hisses summoning ancient powers
heaven
roaring - mighty lion arises
diamond
collar - sudden meteor showers
mythical
realm alive..full of surprises
Captain & cat riding the mighty beast
off
to the moon, facing that martian loon
stealing
Truedessa, this madness must cease
soon
this creature will be singing a new tune
Roaming
the dark side avoiding craters
Leo
the Lion stalking vast stars
seeking
that little green traitor
sending
his probing ways back to mars
Captain
& cat fighting this evil creature
flinging
moon rocks, from here to there
wild scene for an alien movie feature
out
of nowhere a fire ball from the air
Truedessa
calling upon the universe
powers
of the sun, align with the moon
she
softly sings in harmony poetic verse
casting
a magical spell, martian swoons
Encapsulating the alien in his spacecraft
navigation
set, flying him into a black hole
Truedessa
smiling with glee, Captain laughs
cat hissing lets flee, it's time for us to roll...
Sliding
down yellow moonbeams waiting ship
safe
once again, exhausted they sleep
in
the sunrise they will continue their trip
seeking
the bora bora shores in waters deep
as the moon and sun continues to shine
as the moon and sun continues to shine
posted for dVerse - Continuing the journey
to the Bora Bora Shore seeking that treasure
haha this one had it all
ReplyDeleteEven threw in some things from my hall
Captured the cat well
Those probing martians are not swell
Sliding down on moonbeams too
Like that thought at my zoo
And using the constellation for the two to help
As poor Truedessa gives a yep
Was a nice touch
Then the martian got cocky and such
Sending him into a black hole
Hopefully there he gets hung from a flag pole
Another great tale
To the moon and back they sail
glad you enjoyed this tail
Deleteas we continue to sail
seeking that treasure
mixed with some pleasure
weaving our words, for all to see
as the cat struts with glee
Pleasure in the mix
DeleteI sure won't nix haha
That is quite a journey you are on. Nice to see familiar Pat & the Cat involved in your adventure!
ReplyDeleteMary,
DeleteThanks, this things has taken on a life of it's own
fun to weave an adventure with Pat & the cat..
sliding down moonbeams to the ships....how fantastical is that...ha...i love these tales of you and pat....def want to fight off the aliens...they have some nasty probes, just saying...hahah
ReplyDeleteBrian,
DeleteYou made me smile..love that word fantastical..I agree need to get rid of those alien probes..
Dream-like... and very adventurous... A very interesting creation. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
Thank you HA I enjoy writing these here and there..
Deletehaha...you and pat def. have some nice adventures out there... and beware of the martians...smiles
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia..I guess we just like to have fun on the journey to that bora bora shore..lol..
DeleteSuch and adventure well narrated. >KB
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Deleteour stories woven, golden threads
ReplyDeleteadventures waiting, stories given birth....true and you and Pat-Nice!
Thank you ayala for visiting..always nice to see you here...
Deleteyour adventure continue to captivate..
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn..they are fun to write..
DeleteMagical journey you took us on. Feels like one of my crazy dreams. LOL
ReplyDeleteHi Linda,
DeleteI think we all have some crazy dreams that is what makes dreams so interesting..
Beautifully! written poem. You're rhymes capture the essences of nature and its balance.
ReplyDeleteBravo!
Thank you very much for such a kind comment.
DeleteThis was fun for me - surreal, fictional fantasy - on the way to the shores of Bora Bora - I'm liking this a lot.
ReplyDeleteHi Gay,
DeleteThank you for visiting and I'm glad you liked the fantasy story.
How fun & magical an adventure that it made the Martian swoon ~ And you rhyme too, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
DeleteThanks for the kind words..it might be hard to make a Martian swoon but, anything is possible on the moon.
Simply entrancing, Trudessa - enjoyed the journey, thank you :)
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome and thanks for visiting.
DeleteA wonderfully entertaining write, Truedessa! Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you Charles..I have missed you around here..
DeleteI like your imagery - especially about the lion's diamond collar!
ReplyDeleteHello Sherry,
DeleteThanks for visiting and leaving a comment..
Very, very nice. I loved the imagery & rhythm in this poem! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Katie..appreciate the feedback
DeleteAs beautiful as your name:)
ReplyDeleteVandana,
DeleteThank you for the beautiful comment..
Oh my gosh--you and pat seem to be having a nice time! Very clever. K.
ReplyDeleteGood Morning Karin,
DeleteIt has been a bit of fun writing these adventures and it is always nice to know that viewers enjoy them as well...thank you!
Well constructed with original and intriguing imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you James..
DeleteWhat a fantastic journey reading this poem was. I especially love the owl flying to the moon - I made a similar trip yesterday afternoon midst two jobs - we might have passed in transit!! GREAT write. Sigh. I am happy just reading it.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry,
DeleteI am so glad to see you here and I am not surprised that you saw the owl in my writing. It is a great night hawk for sure with great vision. Thank you for reading and the wonderful comment.
Magical & so beautifully written....love the blanket of darkness, nowhere to hide!
ReplyDeleteHello, Glad to see you I hope your muse has returned...
DeleteBeautiful rondeau!
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