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| Photograph by Anita Sedberry at Harold Ross Fine Art Photography. |
Tell me, how I can ignite your heart
there's a melody waiting to start
this fire inside cannot be snuffed
will my poetic words be enough
Tell me, everything will be okay
as our moonlit dreams fade away
finding the pathway can be rough
will my poetic words be enough
Tell me, how I can ignite your heart
flame of light, I am ready to rock
tonight, it's you I'm thinking of
will my poetic words be enough
Tell me how you feel tonight
tell me how you feel tonight
tell me everything will be okay
tell me everything will be okay
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Ah! but your poetic words did bring to light some semblance of your dreams. Nice one
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thank you Gillena,
DeleteHappy Sunday to you
Lovely questions raised. I say it is enough my friend! Beautiful words from a beautiful poet's heart. I love this Truedessa!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carrie, Hopefully, the wick will ignite in a burst of light.
DeleteThe repetition catches and pulls me along.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I guess it was worth repeating as my thoughts looped in my head.
DeleteI fear the wisp of smoke has already told you ... but then I'm an old cynic!!
ReplyDeleteHaha, perhaps the smoke is a sign.
DeleteBeautiful, True. I like the repetition, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks, feeling melancholy
DeleteYour poetic words are more than enough ~~~ cheers and Happy Sunday!
ReplyDeleteVery kind of you to say!
DeleteReady to rock - you are!
ReplyDeleteAs Neil Young sings in my head....
DeleteHey, hey, my, my
Rock and roll can never die
There's more to the picture
Than meets the eye
"How can I gain your trust 'for better or worse'"?
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Interesting comment and one to ponder.
DeleteThis sounds like a song!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you could hear the melody
Delete"Tell me, everything will be okay
ReplyDeleteas our moonlit dreams melt away"
Wonderful!!
Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment
DeleteI so enjoyed the rhythm. Exquisite!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteThe repetition served you well here, building tension and anticipation. I hope it gets the target of such passion out onto the dance floor :)
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