Thursday, August 11, 2022

Sturgeon Moon - I'll See You Soon

Background, Nature, Moonlight, Emotion
courtesy of Pixabay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rising high in the evening glow
shining light on the earth below
filling space between the stars
hiding my craters, my scars
sometimes, I'm in a blue mood
romantic hearts, I have wooed
rising high in the evening glow
shining light on the earth below


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writing to the Octelle Form

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17 comments:

  1. A very timely subject - hello sturgeon moon. I think we can all relate to this part so well: hiding my craters, my scars
    sometimes, I'm in a blue mood. Also the lines 7 & 8, didn't read like a refrain; i read it with a sublte twist.

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  2. I like the vulnerability in this. The refrain is great and does feel a bit different at the end, if only we can catch it in full view! 💝

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  3. Wonderful personification of the moon. Enjoyed this piece.

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  4. This is just perfect. And i luv moon poems.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog.

    Much💖love

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  5. I love that you are talking to the moon which I find so personal. This was so delightful ☺️💕

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  6. Wonderful, I love how you make the repeat at the end seem fresh and new.

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  7. Tanmay Thomas PhilipAugust 12, 2022

    This was very clever, with the craters and scars and blue mood. You really make the moon come alive in all her different aspects. Terrific!

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  8. A beautiful write, Truedessa. Love these lines especially:

    "filling space between the stars
    hiding my craters, my scars"

    <3

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  9. I saw the moon last night - round, full, golden, with a hazy ring around it...........so beautiful, and so close!!!!!

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  10. Lyrical and lithe, smiling while longing. Some mix up in the third couplet; your rhyme scheme was cd not cc it seems.

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  11. Such a lovely personification of the moon. You made me feel empathy for her <3

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  12. Your poem was a wonderful as the moon last night True! Lovely lunar madness my friend… 🙂✌🏼❤️

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  13. An inquisitive chat with the moon. I like the references to scars and craters. A lovely poem.

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  14. Beautiful personification. The Moon looks gorgeous!

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  15. The moon can light as well as hide. Great poem, Trudessa!

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